Short screenplay from the Done Deal "March Madness" contest,
       March 2009.

       "Young Love"


               FADE IN:

               EXT. STREET OUTSIDE APARTMENT BUILDING - DAY

               A car pulls in and parks.


               INT. EDDIE'S CAR - DAY

               EDDIE, 20, turns off the engine.  He looks at his younger 
               brother CLARENCE, 18, who stares straight ahead like a 
               mindless zombie.

                                     EDDIE
                         I want you to stay in the car.

                                     CLARENCE
                         I hate being left alone.

                                     EDDIE
                         I won't be long.

                                     CLARENCE
                         I'll set fire to myself.

                                     EDDIE
                         Aw come on, five minutes, just give 
                         me five minutes.

               Eddie opens his door to climb out.

                                     CLARENCE
                         Does she even know you have a brother?  
                         Do you ever mention me?  You are 
                         ashamed of me, aren't you?  It's 
                         because I'm... different.

               Clarence slowly bows his head, a picture of sadness.

               Eddie wrestles with his guilt.  Guilt wins.

                                     EDDIE
                         All right!


               INT. APARTMENT LIVING ROOM - DAY

               Cluttered with boxes and stuff, as if someone's just moving 
               in.  Front door lies open.  Outside on the landing, Eddie 
               rings the doorbell.  Clarence picks his nose and wipes it on 
               the landing wall.

                                     EDDIE
                         Don't stare at her.

                                     CLARENCE
                         I won't stare at her.

               But when BINKY, a blonde titty fantasy in a tight tee shirt 
               comes bouncing into the living room with great enthusiasm, 
               Clarence stares so hard his eyes cross.

                                     BINKY
                         Eddie!

               Binky gives Eddie a little kiss -- but kinda hesitates because 
               she doesn't know Clarence.

                                     EDDIE
                         My brother, Clarence.  I thought we 
                         could use an extra pair of hands!

               Binky goes along with his fake enthusiasm.

                                     BINKY
                         You're right!  There's so much to 
                         do!  Kaylee and Jenny haven't shown 
                         up yet.  Could you come through and 
                         help me move a couple of little 
                         things?  It's kinda crowded but you 
                         and me should be able to squeeze in.

               Using subtle sex code, involving touching her crotch and 
               breasts and jerking her head toward the bedroom as if she's 
               having a seizure, Binky invites Eddie to come play with her, 
               ALONE.  Eddie gets it.

                                     BINKY
                         Maybe Clarence would like a juice?

                                     CLARENCE
                         That would be wonderful, and 
                         refreshing, too.

               Binky goes into the kitchen.  While she's gone, Eddie wags a 
               warning finger at Clarence and gives him a stern look.  
               Behave, or else.  Clarence shrugs and spreads his hands 
               innocently.

               Binky returns with a juice, gives it to Clarence.

                                     BINKY
                         We'll be right back!

               Binky leads Eddie into the bedroom and foots the door shut 
               behind them.  Silence.

               Clarence sips his juice.  He looks around.  He casually lifts 
               a box lid and looks inside.  Books.  He opens another box.  
               Ornaments wrapped in bubble plastic.  He looks in a third 
               box.  Folded clothing.

               Clarence wanders around the room, examining stuff.  And as 
               he does this, he sticks his finger up his nose and smears 
               booger across everything he touches, as if he's marking 
               territory.


               INT. BEDROOM - DAY

               Binky stands against a wall with her arms raised and her 
               eyes shut while Eddie molests her breasts with his face.

                                     BINKY
                         I need it so bad.  I need it.

                                     EDDIE
                         Shhh!

                                     BINKY
                         Why couldn't you come alone?

                                     EDDIE
                         Our folks are out of town.  I gotta 
                         keep an eye on Clarence.

                                     BINKY
                         He's old enough.


               INT. APARTMENT LIVING ROOM - DAY

               Clarence opens a box and finds -- yowzah!  His eyes go big 
               like saucers.  With reverence, he lifts out a pair of almost 
               transparent black lace panties and holds them before his 
               face.


               INT. APARTMENT BEDROOM - DAY

               Binky and Eddie grind against each other so hard they could 
               start a fire if they're not careful.

                                     BINKY
                         Doesn't he have a girlfriend?

                                     EDDIE
                         Restraining order.

               Binky's eyes open.

                                     BINKY
                         What?

                                     EDDIE
                         There was an incident.

                                     BINKY
                         What does that mean?

                                     EDDIE
                         Clarence gets a little excited.  
                         About everything.  That's why 
                         someone's gotta keep an eye on him.  
                         Concentrate, dammit.

                                     BINKY
                         Tongue me.


               INT. APARTMENT LIVING ROOM - DAY

               Binky and Eddie emerge from the bedroom trying to look 
               innocent, but they have that post-tongue disheveled look 
               about them.

               Binky stops so suddenly that Eddie walks into her.

               Binky stares in horror.  Eddie groans and claps his hand 
               over his eyes.

               Clarence spins round, caught in the act.  He's naked except 
               for a pair of Binky's bra and panties.  He wears another bra 
               over his head as if to keep his ears warm.  His feet are 
               jammed into a pair of red spike heel shoes.

                                     CLARENCE
                         I can explain.

                                     BINKY
                         You better!

                                     CLARENCE
                         He dresses me up like a doll when 
                         our parents are out of town.

               Binky turns an accusing look on Eddie, who gapes in horror 
               at Clarence.


               INT. LANDING OUTSIDE BINKY'S APARTMENT - DAY

               Binky pushes Eddie and Clarence outside and slams the door.

               Eddie bangs on the door.

                                     EDDIE
                         Binky, please!  Open up!  I need to 
                         talk to you!  He lies!  A lot!

                                     CLARENCE
                         Show some self-respect.  Don't beg 
                         her.  Be your own man.

               The door opens -- Binky throws Clarence's clothes at him.  
               She slams the door shut again.

                                     EDDIE
                         Binky, come on!

               The door opens again.  Eddie opens his mouth to plead but 
               Binky reaches past him and grabs her bra off Clarence's head.  
               She retreats inside, the door slams shut again.

                                     EDDIE
                         Aw, man.


               INT. APARTMENT LIVING ROOM - DAY

               Puzzled, Binky sniffs the air.

               Uncertain, she lifts her bra to her nose and sniffs.  Ewww!  
               Revolting!

               Something shiny on a nearby box lid catches her eye.  Binky 
               peers closely.  Her eyes widen.  Giant booger, hanging there.


               INT. EDDIE'S CAR - DAY

               Clarence, in the passenger seat, still in bra and panties, 
               sips his juice.

                                     CLARENCE
                         Young love is a fragile thing.

                                     EDDIE
                         One more word out of you, you freak.


               INT. APARTMENT BEDROOM - DAY

               Binky stands naked in front of a full length mirror.  She 
               slowly lifts the bra up to her breasts.  She closes her eyes 
               and groans as she massages the bra against her skin, softly 
               at first, then harder and harder.  Her gasps become passionate 
               groans, building up to yelps of pleasure.

               FADE OUT


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