Short screenplay from the Done Deal Memorial Day contest,
       June 2007

       "Wings of Eagles"

       FADE IN:

       EXT. SKIES OVER FRANCE - DAY

       Smoke trails write curling patterns across the blue sky as
       biplanes fight to the death.

       A German biplane spirals down in flames and EXPLODES on the
       ground.  The wreckage burns, a pillar of black smoke marks
       the pilot's grave.

       An American biplane zooms through the smoke, wings wiggling.


       EXT. YODEL'S COCKPIT - FLYING - DAY

       The pilot cranes his neck to check out the burning wreckage
       below.  CORPORAL PETE YODEL grins at his victory.  22,
       handsome, cocky, a gifted pilot who thinks the Great War is
       just... well, great.

       Tracer rounds whip past Yodel's head, his grin vanishes,
       another German is on his tail, guns blazing.


       EXT. AERIAL COMBAT - YODEL VS. GERMAN - DAY

       Yodel twists and turns and somehow gets behind the German
       and shoots him full of holes!  The German trails smoke and
       breaks off, flying close to the ground.


       EXT. YODEL'S COCKPIT - FLYING - DAY

       Yodel watches the German fly away as he flies off in another
       direction.  He slaps his machine guns, not happy at all.


       EXT. AMERICAN AIR BASE - DAY

       Tin huts, a dirt runway, a limp American flag.

       Just off the runway two MECHANICS service a biplane, they
       stop and watch as Yodel brings his biplane in to land.

                             MECHANIC #1
                 Yodel's good but he's no Rogers,
                 that's for sure.


       EXT. YODEL'S BIPLANE - AIRFIELD - DAY

       Yodel climbs down and takes off his leather flying helmet.
       BRIGGS, his mechanic, older and wiser, walks up and examines
       the biplane, notices the bullet holes.

                             BRIGGS
                 I guess the ventilation gives you
                 extra lift, huh?

                             YODEL
                 You're a funny man, Briggs.  Get
                 your paint brush, I need another
                 cross on my fuselage.  Right there
                 beside the other two.

       Two German crosses already decorate the fuselage.

                             BRIGGS
                 If it's all right with you, I'll
                 wait until it's confirmed.

                             YODEL
                 It will be.


       INT. ADMINISTRATION HUT - DAY

       STAFF SERGEANT SHAW looks up from papers as Yodel enters.
       Shaw jerks his thumb over his shoulder, telling Yodel to go
       see CAPTAIN KERAWAY, 30s.  Yodel saunters over to Keraway's
       desk.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 Corporal Yodel.  You're back.

                             YODEL
                 Guess I am, sir.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 Where are Lieutenant Rogers and
                 Sergeant Mackenzie?

                             YODEL
                 Soon as we hit low cloud they pulled
                 a disappearing act.  Guess they must
                 have got lost.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 Stand to attention.

       Yodel wearily stands to attention, he's been here before.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 At this morning's briefing you were
                 told to patrol Sector Nine.  According
                 to reports from our esteemed British
                 colleagues, you flew into Sector
                 Seven.

                             YODEL
                 In pursuit of a Boche fighter.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 Navigation isn't your strong point,
                 is it Yodel?

                             YODEL
                 There's nothing wrong with my map
                 reading, Captain.  It's those pesky
                 Germans, they just won't respect the
                 grid lines.  And by the way?  I shot
                 that Boche down.  Maybe the Brits
                 will be kind enough to confirm my
                 kill.

       A droning biplane engine catches their attention.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 Sergeant Shaw, see who that is--

                             YODEL
                 It's Rogers.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 That's a wild guess.

                             YODEL
                      (honestly surprised)
                 It's Rogers' engine.


       EXT. ADMINISTRATION HUT - DAY

       Yodel, Captain Karaway and Shaw exit the hut and watch as a
       biplane glides in to land.


       EXT. ROGERS' BIPLANE - AIRFIELD - DAY

       LIEUTENANT BILL ROGERS wearily climbs down and takes off his
       oil-spattered goggles and leather flying helmet.  He surveys
       the damage to his riddled kite, shakes his head.

       Rogers looks over at the administration hut, sees the three
       men.  His eyes narrow.


       INT. SHARED PILOT QUARTERS HUT - DAY

       Yodel peels off his fleece jacket and hangs it up.  He pours
       water into a bowl and splashes his face.

       SERGEANT OREN MARTIN lies on a lower bunk reading a book.

                             MARTIN
                 This English dame is driving me nuts,
                 she can't decide if she wants the
                 English guy or the French guy.

                             YODEL
                 I bet if one of 'em turned up wearing
                 a pilot's uniform, she'd decide pretty
                 damn quick.

                             MARTIN
                 Are you speaking from experience?

                             YODEL
                 It's a theory I'm working on.

       Staff Sergeant Shaw enters.

                             SHAW
                 Thought you'd like to know.  Sergeant
                 Mackenzie came down on the British
                 side of the line.

                             MARTIN
                 He okay?

                             SHAW
                 He's got two busted legs.  Captain
                 thinks he might be shipped home.

       Yodel towels his face dry.

                             YODEL
                 That's too bad.

                             SHAW
                 Rogers confirmed they lost you in
                 cloud.  You're off the hook.

                             YODEL
                 I was never on the hook.

       Shaw exits, glancing at Martin on the way out.  His look
       says "This boy is trouble."  Martin shrugs.

                             MARTIN
                 They tell me my kite's ready to fly
                 again.

                             YODEL
                 That's bad news.

                             MARTIN
                 What's that supposed to mean?

                             YODEL
                 If you're shooting down Germans,
                 that means there's less for me.

       Martin shakes his head and reads his book.  Yodel puts on a
       shirt and buttons it up.


       EXT. SHARED PILOT QUARTERS HUT - DAY

       Yodel exits the hut and runs into Rogers' fist.  Yodel hits
       the ground and lies stunned for a moment.

                             ROGERS
                 Sam Mackenzie sends his love.

                             YODEL
                 Go ahead, blame it on me.  You're
                 the one who was with him.

                             ROGERS
                 Four Germans jumped us.  You should'a
                 been there.

       Rogers stamps into the hut.  Yodel gets up, rubs his jaw.


       INT. ADMINISTRATION HUT - DAY

       Yodel, Rogers, Martin and NEFFER, a young pilot new to the
       group, sit as Captain Keraway points to a detailed map.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 We'll be supporting the big push in
                 Sector Nine today, I repeat--
                      (looking at Yodel)
                 --Sector Nine.  That means keeping
                 the Germans' heads down.  Lieutenant
                 Rogers, you'll be flying with Sergeant
                 Martin as your wingman.  You two
                 will lead the attack.

       Yodel senses what's coming... doesn't want to hear it.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 Corporal Yodel, you'll fly with
                 Private Neffer as your wingman.
                 You'll provide straffing support for
                 Lieutenant Rogers and Sergeant Martin.

                             YODEL
                 I don't see why I should have to
                 nursemaid some damn rookie.

       No one's happy with that, least of all nervous Neffer.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 If any Boche aircraft are sighted,
                 Lieutenant Rogers will decide whether
                 to withdraw or engage.  You'll watch
                 for his signals and follow his
                 instructions.  Is that understood?

       Keraway and Yodel lock stares.  Yodel sighs, defeated.

                             YODEL
                 Yes, sir.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 Briefing is concluded.  See Staff
                 Sergeant Shaw for signals of the day
                 and weather reports.

       Everyone gets up and heads for Shaw's desk.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 Yodel.

       Yodel stops, turns back.

                             CAPTAIN KERAWAY
                 It's Neffer's first mission.  Try
                 and make sure it's not his last.


       EXT. FLYING ABOVE GERMAN TRENCHES - VARIOUS - DAY

       Four American biplanes, two leading, two following.

       German soldiers with spike helmets see the four biplanes
       flying overhead.  SHOUTS of alarm, random SHOTS.

       Rogers looks down -- sees something -- signals to Martin.

       Martin gives a thumbs-up to Rogers.

       Rogers chucks a bomb at the Germans below.

       An EXPLOSION -- flying mud, SCREAMS.

       Yodel fires his machine guns.

       German soldiers are mowed down by Yodel's deadly fire.

       Yodel looks up--

       Six German biplanes are diving like hawks on their prey!

       Oblivious, Rogers chucks another bomb, and another...

       Yodel wiggles his wings, look at me, look at me!

       Martin looks back over his shoulder -- sees Yodel -- looks
       up, reacts with horror--

       The leading German biplane spits tracer.

       Martin is riddled with bullets, his biplane flips over and
       crashes and blows up.

       Rogers looks up, sees the danger, banks his plane, looks
       around for Yodel and Neffer.

       Neffer's looking everywhere, scared witless, he sees Rogers,
       Rogers circles his arm and points -- return to base!

       Yodel slaps his guns and points up, let's take 'em on!

       Rogers shakes his head, return to base, return to base!

       The three American biplanes turn and run for it.

       The six German biplanes pair off, two for each American.

       Yodel flips his biplane into a barrel roll, he's behind an
       astonished German, he blasts the German out of the sky.

       But Rogers sees Yodel's maneuver leaves Neffer vulnerable.

                             ROGERS
                 Stay with Neffer, dammit!  Stay with
                 your wingman!

       Neffer tries to shake the Germans on his tail but they stick
       to him like glue, bullet holes pepper his wings.

       Yodel outmaneuvers and coldly kills his second German.

       Rogers banks and flies across Neffer's tail -- drawing fire
       from four German biplanes -- giving Neffer a chance.

       Rogers dies in a hail of bullets, he slumps forward.

       Yodel turns in time to see Rogers' biplane dive into the
       ground.  Yodel understands what Rogers did.  Jesus!

       The two Germans who killed Rogers turn and head for home.

       Yodel angrily banks after them, gets one in his sights, pulls
       the trigger -- his guns are empty!  Yodel curses.

       Yodel looks down, sees the two Germans on Neffer's tail.

       Neffer still can't shake the Germans off, he's trailing smoke
       and he's scared, bullets zip and sping around him.

       Yodel dives in pursuit.

       Neffer skims low over the ground, the Germans are equally
       low, closing the last inches for the inevitable kill.

       Yodel's biplane smashes through the Germans' wings, sending
       them all tumbling into the ground.  Three fiery EXPLOSIONS.

       Neffer looks back.  Three columns of black smoke rise above
       the German trenches.  Neffer continues on, a lone eagle,
       flying home.

       FADE OUT


                                                           05/07
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