Short screenplay from the Done Deal Christmas short contest,
       Dec 2008

       "Red Alert"


       FADE IN:

       INT. WELL-LIT CORRIDOR - NIGHT

       Rapid FOOTSTEPS. We float along the corridor, just ahead of
       whoever's marching behind us.

       We turn a sharp left into another corridor and float towards
       a door marked, "C.I.C. - COMMAND INFORMATION CENTER."

       A MILITARY POLICEMAN opens the door for us, and we enter--


       INT. COMMAND INFORMATION CENTER - NIGHT

       Control panels and displays borrowed from SG-1.

       SERGEANT PETE BOBBIN sits at his station, watching a radar
       scope.

       The door is opened by the MP outside, and LIEUTENANT HANK
       SPITZBURGER storms in, all spit and polish.

       SPITZBURGER
       Hell's going on, Sergeant?

       BOBBIN
       Defense chain lit up five minutes
       ago, sir. We have an inbound "X"
       range thirty miles, speed five hundred
       knots, heading right for us.

       Spitzburger peers over Bobbin's shoulder. On the radar scope,
       a contact FLASHES near the top of the screen. Little numbers
       indicate range, velocity.

       SPITZBURGER
       Have you communicated with the
       inbound?

       BOBBIN
       Inbound has refused parley.

       SPITZBURGER
       Have you nominated alert fighters?

       BOBBIN
       Two border interdiction F-18s are in
       the air, estimated time to intercept,
       three minutes. He'll be on top of
       us before they get to him.

       On the radar scope, the contact FLASH is much closer.

       SPITZBURGER
       We are going to Level One.

       Spitzburger takes a key on a chain from around his neck.
       Bobbin does the same.

       They insert their keys into opposite ends of a control panel.

       SPITZBURGER
       On my mark, three, two, one.

       On "one" they twist their keys at the same time.


       EXT. SNOWBOUND WILDERNESS - NIGHT

       A remote-controlled missile rack shakes off a covering of
       snow, rotates and lifts its nose up so its twin missiles
       point at the sky.


       INT. COMMAND INFORMATION CENTER - NIGHT

       BOBBIN
       We have missile lock.

       Spitzburger snatches up a microphone.

       SPITZBURGER (INTO MIKE)
       Unidentified aircraft you are in
       violation of military airspace and
       will be shot down if you continue on
       your present course. Respond please.

       They stare at a loudspeaker. It just HISSES.

       SPITZBURGER
       Unidentified aircraft this is your
       last chance. Respond please.

       More HISSING from the loudspeaker.

       BOBBIN
       Inbound will be over us in thirty
       seconds, sir.

       SPITZBURGER
       I authorize you to shoot.

       BOBBIN
       Shooting now.

       Bobbin flips up a protective cover and thumbs a red button.


       EXT. SNOWBOUND WILDERNESS - NIGHT

       The twin missiles blast from the launch rack and zip up into
       the sky.

       Seconds tick by... a section of the sky lights up briefly,
       like a fireworks display, then darkens again.


       INT. COMMAND INFORMATION CENTER - NIGHT

       The radar scope is clear.

       BOBBIN
       Inbound has been destroyed, sir.

       SPITZBURGER
       Inform Command Six that we have taken
       out an unidentified aircraft with
       extreme prejudice. Squirt them
       details and voice recordings.
       Maintain Level One alert for thirty
       minutes, then stand down if no further
       activity.

       BOBBIN
       Yes, sir.

       Spitzburger heads for the door. Before he exits, a telephone
       RINGS. Bobbin picks up the receiver.

       BOBBIN (INTO PHONE)
       C.I.C. go ahead.

       As he listens, Bobbin's frown deepens.

       SPITZBURGER
       What is it?

       BOBBIN
       Observation station reports falling
       debris, sir.

       SPITZBURGER
       Can they tell what type of aircraft?

       Bobbin listens some more, then hangs up.

       BOBBIN
       That's what's confusing them, sir.

       SPITZBURGER
       We'll send out a team in the morning--

       BOBBIN
       Animal guts, sir. And... toys.
       Thousands and thousands of toys.

       Realization hits them. Spitzburger and Bobbin exchange
       horrified looks.


       EXT. SNOWBOUND WILDERNESS - NIGHT

       A blackened, smoking teddy bear with one eye hanging out
       lies on a field of white snow, surrounded by splotches of
       bright red blood, a tragic casualty.

       Tilt up at the dark sky.

       Faint sound of BELLS a-jingling.

       FADE OUT

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