Short from the Done Deal Halloween contest, Nov 2011 "Lost And Found" FADE IN: INT. CHEAP CRAPPY APARTMENT - DAY On ALICE, 10 years old, dressed up as a cute little witch complete with pointed hat and broomstick. She wears a scowl that could curdle milk. She is receiving a lecture. CONSTANCE (O.S.) Anyone twigs what's going on, you whack 'em on the noggin with the broom and run for the door. Don't try to talk your way out of it. You ain't that smart. CONSTANCE is Alice's mother, a jittery crackhead who loves only one thing in life, and it isn't Alice. PETE is Constance's boyfriend, he has a police rap sheet as long as your leg and has been pronounced clinically stupid by psychiatric professionals. He hands Alice a bag. PETE This ain't for candy. You see anything worth snatching, you snatch it. Money, jewelry, anything shiny that's worth a buck, you take it. ALICE I know what to do. PETE Don't smart-mouth me, kid. ALICE Have we got any food? I'm hungry. CONSTANCE That's why we're doing this! To get money for food! Alice eyes up her mother as Constance twitches and scratches, eager for a hit. Yeah, right, money for food. Alice knows the score. PETE You can eat some candy, if they offer it. ALICE Thank you. PETE As long as it doesn't interfere with your job. You got that, pip-squeak? Constance and Pete turn away from Alice and talk to each other in whispers. Alice gives Pete the finger behind his back. Constance and Pete come to an agreement. Pete shrugs on his jacket and picks up his car keys. PETE All right. Let's go. Alice trudges after him, dragging her broom. CONSTANCE Make mommy proud! EXT. PROSPEROUS SUBURBAN STREET - NIGHT Aw, it's Halloween, and little trick-or-treaters are visiting houses, escorted by adults. Pete's car, a beat-up wreck, is parked at the curb. Inside, Pete and Alice watch the activity. INT. PETE'S CAR - NIGHT Pete points out a particular house. Light's on in the front porch. A pumpkin lantern invites little Munchkins to ring the bell. PETE On you go. Alice opens the passenger door. PETE You mess this up, pip-squeak, your own mother won't even recognize you. That I promise you. EXT. PETE'S CAR - NIGHT Alice climbs out. Pete shoos her away, go, go! EXT. PUMPKIN LANTERN HOUSE - NIGHT Alice walks up the path towards the porch. She looks back across the street at Pete's car. Pete's car is empty. Pete's nowhere to be seen. EXT. PUMPKIN LANTERN HOUSE - NIGHT Alice rings the doorbell. While she waits, she nervously looks up and down the street. The door opens, a kindly old couple, MATTY and LOUISE, smile at her. MATTY Hello, young lady. LOUISE Isn't she just the cutest witch you've ever seen? ALICE Trick or treat? LOUISE Oh, I think we're too old to have tricks played on us. Why don't you come in and have some candy? ALICE Thank you. Alice steps inside and Matty closes the door behind her. INT. NEATLY FURNISHED LIVING ROOM - NIGHT Alice finds herself staring at a little table laden with goodies, bowls of candy and cakes. Alice's stomach GROWLS. LOUISE Oh my, are you hungry? MATTY Anything you want, just take it. Fill your bag. Maybe have a little nibble now, if you like. ALICE Thanks. Alice nibbles a piece of candy, unaware that Matty and Louise are watching her, and looking at each other, and frowning. EXT. REAR OF PUMPKIN LANTERN HOUSE - NIGHT Pete expertly uses a jimmy to open the back door. He slips inside without a sound. INT. NEATLY FURNISHED LIVING ROOM - NIGHT As Alice puts candy into her bag, she furtively looks around the room, noting things to steal. A lady's purse. A leather wallet. Display cabinets and shelves containing silver frames and statuettes and rare coins. Thief's paradise. MATTY We're just going into the kitchen for a second. LOUISE We'll be right back. You just help yourself, dear. Smiling, Matty and Louise exit to the kitchen. INT. DARK ROOM - NIGHT Pete moves around cautiously. He can't hardly see a thing. He finds his way to a door. He slowly turns the handle, cracks the door open, and peers out. INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT Matty and Louise in urgent whispered conversation: MATTY It can't be her, it's just coincidence. LOUISE She's the spitting image! A door slowly opens behind Louise. Matty's eyes widen-- INT. NEATLY FURNISHED LIVING ROOM Alice grabs every valuable she can see and stuffs it into her bag. Her hand pauses, inches from a silver framed photograph of a smiling pretty teen girl. Alice snatches the photo frame and stuffs it into her bag. No, wait. She goes back into the bag. Takes out the frame and looks at it. She puts it back where it was before. Alice hears VOICES. She runs for the front door, opens it. She's about to exit when Matty and Louise retreat into the living room. Pete follows them, holding a gun. Matty and Louise cling to each other, terrified. PETE Close the friggin door, stupid! Alice closes the front door. Matty and Louise glance from Pete to Alice, putting two and two together. Alice glances down at her bulging bag. Louise follows her gaze, and knows what's in there. Louise's fear turns to disappointment. It touches Alice, who looks away in shame. PETE Rich folks like you, I bet you got a safe. MATTY We're not rich and we don't have a safe. Take whatever you want. Just don't hurt my wife. Pete wiggles his gun at them, acting tough. PETE Show me the safe or I'll put one in your old lady, so help me God. WHACK! Alice bats the gun out of Pete's hand with her broom. PETE You little pip-squeak, I'm gonna--! Pete lunges for her but Alice skips back. Pete trips over a coffee table and sprawls on the floor. Alice holds her broom like a baseball bat and WHACKS Pete on the kisser. Pete goes down and stays down. Matty and Louise and Alice stare at each other. OMG did that just happen? Alice runs out the front door, leaving her bag and broom behind. EXT. STREET - NIGHT Alice walks along, head down, dragging her feet. She stops and looks round as STROBING RED/BLUE LIGHTS suggests a cop car has just pulled up beside her. EXT. POLICE STATION - NIGHT (STOCK FOOTAGE) INT. POLICE STATION - NIGHT Matty and Louise talk to the DESK SERGEANT who points out Alice sitting on a bench, looking alone and dejected. She hasn't noticed them yet. DESK SERGEANT Found her walking near your house. Pretty easy to spot, kid on her own, dressed as a witch. MATTY What about the man? DESK SERGEANT The boyfriend says the kid's mother made him do it. She says the robberies were all his idea. We'll let the judge figure it out in the morning. Armed robbery, he's going away for a long time. LOUISE (meaning Alice) What about her? DESK SERGEANT Social work's sending someone over. MATTY No need for that. She can come home with us. DESK SERGEANT I'm sorry, it's standard procedure. I can't just-- LOUISE She's our grand-daughter. They look over at Alice, who maybe senses something because she looks up, scowling. Louise hesitantly offers Alice a warm smile. Very slowly, as she stares at her long-lost grand-parents and their kindly vibes reach out to embrace her, Alice loses her scowl and becomes a little girl again. FADE OUT
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